by Tangible heartache Sep 25, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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The soft patter of rain, |
by Mishka
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I really like how you brought in so many issues into this one poem. makes you think... why so much sinning? you would think,... this world's number one religion, christianity... wouldnt ppl stop and thnk... hey... we shouldnt do this? |
by slighte
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Beautiful. the imagery is good in this poem, because it's so descriptive. |