Thats a new read for me! You did very well on making it flow. just perhaps instead of repeating the word night, try using dusk or twilight =]

but i loved the second stanza the best. because i love it when wishes are put into writing, it makes me wonder why and ponder beyong the writing. but lol its funny how u included being crazy --> to a hero ^_^

5/5

~tia

So silly are the ideas that flow at night
Coming and going to release any fight
No meaning left to ponder a night away
Just another sleepless night before day

^^ I know of the demons that can haunt you, when sleep refuses to take control of you.. You manged to describe this feeling very well:)

Take care!

5/5 Ingrid

I like it. reminds me a bit of a old goth story where this woman goes mad in a room papered in yellow wallpaper after noticing a spot and slowly peels away at the room & her sanity,