Love

by -] ñØ òÑé [-   Oct 13, 2008


Have you ever found the one that makes your life feel complete
Where there's no other place you could imagine yourself to be
Did she make your days seem brighter with everything going wrong
And did you ever wonder what would happen if she were ever gone

Have you ever found the one where you could say life was great
Not just the feelings you felt but the smile thats on your face
Where you couldn't kiss her enough to express how much you cared
Have you ever laid in bed at night just wishing she was there

Have you ever looked into her eyes and found more than a shade
Perhaps not a beautiful color but a moment that swept you away
And in that moment did you ever think that time could suddenly stop
Where there's nothing but a moment and a silent ticking clock

Have you ever found enjoyment from the simplest things in life
Like the brilliance of a touch or the thought of your future wife
Did you ever think for one second that things could all go wrong
And that you'd wake one morning to see all of those dreams gone

Have you ever found the one that you would do anything to have
But no matter what you did you knew she wasn't coming back
Did you give up and move on or did you lose more than people see
Was she easily forgettable or did the nightmares never leave

Have you ever found the one where people looked at you as dumb
Because no matter how bad she made you feel you couldn't move on
Were they asking questions like what is it making you feel so sad
And did you look at them like I did and say "The best I ever had..."

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  • 1 year ago

    by J Nair

    Beautiful Poem and each time that query you put forward
    ' Have you ever found the one' it would score a mark.
    The depth of your feeling for your lost love is really endearing. So rarely do we come across someone who can make all the difference in the world and how foolishly or naively you end up loosing it all.
    Later when you cant feel the same around any one else thats when the loss hits you in the gut.
    A loss of true love will make a permanent mark.

    All the best buddy. Hope your heart heals.
    All the best.

  • 2 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A powerful write...so well written and expressed. Loved the rhyme and rhytym throughout. Excelent :-)
    ~ Olwin

  • 5 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Ohohoho this is soooooooooooo sweet Hun

    I loved it 5/5 from meee

  • 6 years ago

    by Robert Daniel Long

    A beautiful poem on lost love. great job

  • 8 years ago

    by megan

    This is my favorite poem of urs that ive read so far, i love your emotion and the way you write its like u write effortlessly!! 5/5

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