Comments : Let There Be A Change (Broken Clock)

  • 10 years ago

    by ReBecca

    I like how you portrayed society as a broken clock. I can actually visualize this grandfather clock standing tall and broken, stuck at a time that is unchangeable. Nicely done.

  • 10 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    This is really clever, a poem that causes deep thought. I know you are supposed to use just the first letter, but it is quite interesting when you use the first word too!

    Well done..I have used this form too.

    Michael