In the second stanza subway is too big of a word, why not change it to bus?
I don't understand why today is part of your fate, it's a dramatic line which isn't followed up anywhere in the poem.
The depression part of this poem lets it down a bit, too.
Now to the good things;
I loved loved loved the idea of this poem, you created great images which I adore and it's a beautiful day here at the moment, which makes it that much more relevant.
You did a great job of making such a beautiful day =]