Comments : Undecided (Ana)

  • 11 years ago

    by onethuscome

    This could be an excellent poem if the idea were a little clearer.im not sure if the whole poem is about the way of your soul or something else. i like the former because it shows the very complex and conflicting nature of "YOUR" soul. there is also the matter of a dual consciousness between your self(conscious self;ego) and your soul(the unconscious) which both supports and afflicts you(much in the ambivalent spirit of nature itself which consists of good and bad, though of course it is so only to OUR PERSPECTIVE.nature in itself is beyond the divisions of our moral,which is to say say social,ideas

    • 11 years ago

      by Shattered Glass

      I wrote this poem in junior high when I was battling an eating disorder. I hope maybe that makes the meaning of this a bit clearer, thank you for reading.

    • 11 years ago

      by Shattered Glass

      I wrote this poem in junior high when I was battling an eating disorder. I hope maybe that makes the meaning of this a bit clearer, thank you for reading.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I think this poem is very unique and that what makes it it's own and an amazing read, because this poem is FANTASTIC