It took me some time to catch up to you but just read this piece I am happy to see you ave not lost your touch or need to write its been some time. Please get back to me and tell me whats going on with you have alot of time to catch up on. I have wrote a few pieces but I guess I will have to get back to the grind myself. Takle care and hope to hear from you soon. Your Fellow poet and friend Robert....
This is excellent and very well written. I could not decide which line meant the most to me.
These three make profound statements:
"in the dungeon of misery her soul fights smiling, it will not last."
"If only the wand of time is in her hands to undo this bitter reality
maybe another path of joy and freedom will become her true destiny,".
It is as if you have stepped into my mind and read my thoughts.
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
An excellently written piece, Meena.
"Years know no forgiveness as it furiously lashes out the past in the dungeon of misery her soul fights smiling, it will not last." A dark and engrossing poem and I particularly loved that line.
All the best Meena,