Love No More (Crown oddguain)

by Sylvia   Nov 22, 2008

is no more.
Angry words spoken,
lifetime commitment, broken.

can't deny,
time to say goodbye.
Existence lost, don't protest.

did it go,
the love that we knew?
A question never answered,

are gone forever.
No future to dream about,

Heart breaking,
shattered once again.
Our love beyond repairing,

Copyright © 2008 Sylvia All Rights Reserved

Oddquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of seventeen syllables distributed 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 in five lines, developed by Glenda L. Shank.

crown oddquain - a five stanza oddquain sequence


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  • 9 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    I love this form, not only the difficulty of it but how it looks. It's classy
    You did an excellent job on this. I wish I had more time to write but in time lol
    wonderful write

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    How very beautiful Silvia!

    You are my source of inspiration, dear lady!


    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    An interesting form that speaks for itself and the subject too is something that those who have failed in love can relate to..nicely done.
    Take care