Comments : Sometimes

  • 9 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    All action stems from our thoughts.
    An enlightening Poem and the most
    beautiful smile.
    Peace and Blessings

  • 9 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Short and to the point. This actually had me in tears, for the meaning behind it was signifigant in many ways.

    Peace, Joe

  • 9 years ago

    by Korede Kuks

    This could tell how your imagination get deeper, kepp going n not lacking behind i'm sure u'll be superb.

    Like to here from you


  • 9 years ago

    by AnCi


  • 9 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Such a beautiful poem

    I must act upon it. Upon my idea.
    I will make it work. When?
    I just don't know.

    So wonderful, keep it up 5/5


  • 9 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    You pull the rug from under my feet with
    last line until that < I JUST DON'T KNOW>
    I thought you were going to take off
    beutifully written 5/5