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I like it
its very well writen
5/5

"Unquietly, my mind bring me to tears-"
`Bring should be brings

"The oldest of my life�s motto�s"
`Something is wrong with this line, gibberish popped up.

I didn't get really passed this line, there really is no flow, sorry. Some great words are thrown in there, however.. which was something I liked. But I think that if I were to suggest something, I'd put this into stanzas, and make your lines the same length, some lines are very long while others are only a few words..
Glancing at your ending, it seemed to fit in well with the title..
Fix this up and make it look like a poem and Ill look at it again.

Long but good i liked how you put your feels keep it up

The title caught my eyes.
A few errors in the reading, but I ABSOLUTELY loved it. :)
You're a good writer, and I enjoyed reading this.