Awww well written...
lovely poem!
xoxo

"You're the part that I need,
the part I fantasy for."
Well, This was.. amazing. One thing I would like to mention ^^^ Should it be "fantasy for" ? It seems like "the part I fantasize for" is better for this piece.. though simply a suggestion, for me, it would sound better.
Now, the flow is very good, and none of the words seemed forced. Well done.
I loved the thoughts that were expressed in this... the way you wrote this, was just simply amazing. For me, it seemed.. it was optimistic, pessimistic, and then realistic. I liked it, and you didn't go off subject, as I see in others.. so overall, this was .. just amazing.

Perfect. 5/5
*Chaotic Angel*

I loved the poem. It was very well written and it is something that I can identify to. My favorite line is:
"This love isn't love,
if there isn't some lust"
That line just sticks out to me. But all in all the poem had really good flow to it, and it really sounded like you were writing from your heart. I wouldn't change a thing about it.

5/5

This is a poem after my own heart. The poem reminds me of a C.S. Lewis book that analyzes four types God-Man parent offspring friend and romantic love

Any that master ant of these in my opinion should aspire to transform romance to reality, easier to write about than to practice as your poem reflects