Wow.amazing. this was another descripitive piece from you Shadowe. I like this one a lot more than the others that i have read. This one had emotions and everything in it, and it rhymed greatly.
((5)) Harlea

"They gave me a green uniform and Tan boots for my feet
Eighteen and wild as hell, I thought it would be neat"
[They gave me a green uniform, tan boots for my feet
Eighteen and wild as hell ... I thought it would be neat]
- ellipsis work well here, I think. You had 'and' two times in two rows and it through me off. So, I do suggest changing one or the other and replacing with a comma.

This poem made me bawl my eyes out, so they say. I feel for our troops and my heart goes out to them. I know a lot of the time they don't realize what they're getting into. Even though I support them for their decision and I'd do almost anything for any of them. I still think that it's not right. There's good men fighting for a lot of selfish people.

It's good though. That when you get home and see your family you know what you have. Unlike many ignorant people in this world.

0.0 this poem is so sad but really good!!
so sad that many dont make it T T *sniff*

THANKS TO ALL WHO SERVE!!!!I PRAY FOR YOU ALL!! GOD BLESS YOU!!