Wow.powerful piece.this was again like the others, very descriptive and well written. you can feel the pain in this and see the images beyond the pain. great job. ((5))
harlea

Words Etched into my soul, leaving scars as they bleed Crimson
Though I try and cry out desperately, but no ones there to listen

is my fav part 5/5 i know how that is

"If I should come back, will I be able to see what is is you see"
[If I should come back, will I be able to see what IT is you see]

"Maybe then angels would cry, and maybe then.... i wont want to die"
[Maybe then angels would cry, maybe then I WOULDN'T want to die]

I'm not sure who 'you' is referring to in this poem. And exactly what it is you want to see. But life is a good thing, even through the trials we go through and ill-thought choices we make. I'm sure you realize that though. I'll pray for you, darling. To stay safe and sane.