Amorous Musing

by Beautiful Chaos   Jan 8, 2009


It could have been those eyes
Sharpened daggers of truth
Divinity of the deepest blue
Always set upon my heart

Perhaps those razor sharp lips
Pouty and perfect
Slicing through the shell of each emotion
Evoking such serenity and chaos at once

Maybe it was that touch
The one that burned through skin
Setting every sense on fire
Demanding submission

Possibly, each one
Wholly and individually
Keeps me loving
Pushing me to explore further

Every moment is a revelation
I live to discover
All that you are
All that I may be

Your essence
Wrapped around my soul
Lifting me beyond
The limits of my mind

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  • 8 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    So elegant and sensual at the same time. Your choice of words throughout the poem is great. I admire the beauty that every stanza holds, it memorable, deeply heartfelt and captivating in so many ways.

    Overall, to me this is truly a superb, flawless write. I can't express how much I enjoyed in every greatly penned line.

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jenn
    What a wonderful poem. Excellent Imagery and word choices.
    Take Care
    (((hugs)))
    Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Teria

    "Maybe it was that touch
    The one that burned through skin
    Setting every sense on fire
    Demanding submission"
    - The stanza made me grin, love the idea of it and meaning behind it.

    The entire poem is well written. I enjoyed the read. Very relatable for those in love OR in lust. Either way it's emotional value is something that human beings desire multiple, multiple times through-out life. Only a few are so strong though, this seems as if it's one of the very strong emotional connections needed with the body.

  • 8 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Well,to be honest, I really didn't understand much of it except it has to do with emotions? Am I right? I like how people have such a big vocabulary, [haha]. I'm not much for big words, as I'm a blonde [go figure]. But somehow I liked how you pulled together this poem. Its very interesting and keeps you wondering about the meaning.

    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Corinne

    Perfect title for a wonderful portrait of an erotic relationship.

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