Comments : Turquoise

  • 9 years ago

    by Solus

    Simple and beautiful. Its calming to read and picture, something that gives a small measure of peace to me. Something I rarely find...

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I thought this was just beautiful. It felt so peaceful and calm as I read it. I really enjoyed the flow and your word choice. You did an excellent job with this piece, good work.

    "curtains lie like silken shadows
    a parted sea of still blue
    against the dark white walls."

    I would take "the" out but this was one of my favorite parts, I like your description here. Again, nice work.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is so beautiful... the picture... the imagery ... brilliantly done...

    "touches the dark, and the
    light ripples gently
    through aquamarine water,
    glinting off exotic scales"

    ^^ I love moonlight getting reflected on water... the beauty is exotic... the shimmering water under the star studded sky .... you have portrayed the scenery wonderfully...

    "Visions float hazy on the air,
    and the night dreams on. "

    ^^beautifully penned..

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :)
    Take Care

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats on the win....beautiful poem full of lovely images and wording.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow!!! that's soo beautiful!
    Your words... wonderful
    The flow... excellent
    You can easily imagine the whole poem and it's soo full of feeling and passion... well done!