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Simple and beautiful. Its calming to read and picture, something that gives a small measure of peace to me. Something I rarely find...
by Beautiful Chaos
I thought this was just beautiful. It felt so peaceful and calm as I read it. I really enjoyed the flow and your word choice. You did an excellent job with this piece, good work.
"curtains lie like silken shadows
a parted sea of still blue
against the dark white walls."
I would take "the" out but this was one of my favorite parts, I like your description here. Again, nice work.
by Lonely Rider
This is so beautiful... the picture... the imagery ... brilliantly done...
"touches the dark, and the
light ripples gently
through aquamarine water,
glinting off exotic scales"
^^ I love moonlight getting reflected on water... the beauty is exotic... the shimmering water under the star studded sky .... you have portrayed the scenery wonderfully...
"Visions float hazy on the air,
and the night dreams on. "
Congrats on your win :)
Congrats on the win....beautiful poem full of lovely images and wording.
by Dark Secrets
Wow!!! that's soo beautiful!
Your words... wonderful
The flow... excellent
You can easily imagine the whole poem and it's soo full of feeling and passion... well done!