The Holocaust

by Aveena   Jan 9, 2009


Starvation, disease, and neglect
brings no escape from that night
they were taken from their loved ones
deprived of their rights
there justice was not served, but denied
they hoped that they would make it,
but not all survived
only because they were Jew's
but now their pain and suffering is over
their souls are at rest in peace.

this was a French assignment i translated
into English.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Chocolate Addict

    From the title , I knew it, the poem was gonna be about the jews. But nonetheless you have describe this poem well.Keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    Nicely put. Powerful and true, 5/5. You don't have to worry about peoples comments. If it's good, it's wonderful. If it's bad, it's experiance :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ravi

    I think Its a nice attempt and correct translation. It could convey the meaning orrectly.

  • 15 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    I loved it, not what it was about of course, but i loved the poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Gem

    For something that was transalated, this is very good.

    Poems dont have to have set rhythm or layout, they can be whatever you want, thats the beauty of it.

    You've done a great job with it!

    5/5
    Gem

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