Comments : Girl in White

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    A very nice somber write, I really enjoyed it.

    She sings a little song,
    Clutching her little toy rabbit,
    With a rose,
    Weeping.

    She lives in our world,
    Unknown to man-kind,
    Why won't Daddy speak to her?

    This was my favorite part, good job.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    Very powerful. Very true. Too the point. It shows just how people forget the things that are really important. Thank you for the reminder, we can all use it. 5/5...xoxo