"The afflicted torn from the passion of life,
Are often found soiled on a divergent path,
But the enthusiast treks in wide-open fields of possibility."

Though I love the whole piece, this was my favorite part. You have done some marvelous work here, it was a joy to read, I am glad I found it, you have a lovely way with words. Your word choice was nice and it all flowed smoothly. Well done.

Didn't find it very free flowing. Second line is too long. Overall it's good but the structure of the poem could have been better.

Yu op don't think I get but I do you are nobody until somdeboby wants you then evreyone does