Dear Cara,

Catchy title for starters and a poem that painted such a vivid picture it made me want to be there, at that beach!

You are very talented, you know that?

Love,

5/5 Ingrid

Your poem made me love the ocean and beach even more. I can almost feel the suns warmth here even though it is only 7 degrees. Thanks for a bright spot in a cold day.

Wow, you have made me speechless, this is absoluetly mind-blowing! Your imagery gives my mind clear and intriguing visuals, and I felt like I was there watching everything happen. You have immense talent and it shows in this poem. 5/5 from me, nice format too, it looks fun to write in! Take care..

Wow i really like how you put this together

Pristine blue water
Flows alongside pure white sand
Waves glide across the shoreline

^^The way you describe this beach is like a paradise, hidden from the world

Providing pleasure
Basking under the hot sun
Swimming in the oceans grip

^^ you have created a relaxing and care free mood that i wish to be in

Overall with little words you have managed to capture the essence of freedom and paradise putting the mind of the reader at ease.I truly love it

Excellent Job
5/5

The title wonderfully complements the write up...imagery is beatiful ...it has very soothing feeling attched to it...

lovely write ...

Good one 5/5

Very well done. I enjoyed this and this form of poetry is one of my favorite that is currently out there. I enjoy a lot of these simple poems, as it is those that make up and tell you the most about a person.

I can Honestly say that this picture is the type of picture that you want to have in your mind when you think of something along these lines.

Wonderfully done.

Thank you very much for the comment on my poem.

5/5

Yours Sincerely,
Shaun Aka Dark Savior.

You won, my dear little Australian girlfriend:)
I am so proud of you Cara and this truly was a winner and so are you.

Super hugs,

Ingridxx

Congratulations on the win, it was so well-deserved and I'm happy you got it! Take care...

Hey, nice poem can you teach me sedoka? am not really familiar with a sedoka..thanx!

You managed to truely capture the essence of a what seems to be a tropical paradise. Your beautiful description has put me in a very calm and happy state of mind. Great Job 5/5