Comments : Sticks and Stones

  • 10 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Very clever write, Its a good poem
    =]
    The flow works really and I enjoyed reading it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Metaphorically this could be taken as disillusioned words like bullets bark
    While human gods aim for their mark and to me what could be more flattering to a master poet as Bob Dylan that you would discover this as he probably reworded
    Many profound metaphorical observations

    Very well written
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 10 years ago

    by cantchangeme

    I've read a few of your poems now
    and what I've realised about your work
    Is you have an amazing talent for creating poems that have brilliant creative flow

    This poem is no different
    It is also filled with some great metaphors
    Most importantly
    it meant something to me

    Great poem, you really are a very talented writer

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    This is an amazing write, very blunt but very to the point. Its flow is a cutesy rhyme that we've had swimming in our head, and you've put it down on paper.

    5/5 - I've read other poems of yours, but this is by far my favorite:)

  • 9 years ago

    by No Need For A Name

    Good poem. I believe you have lots of emotion in it. I just feel the flow is off on the second and last stanzas, you seem to force the flow a little. Also, "and ruin a perfect past" doesn't seem to make sense, but that might be just me. Overall, good.

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • 9 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    I have added this to my favorite poems, if you don't mind. This poem is the first to be on my Favorites List. I loved the way it flow, I loved the everything of it.
    I thought it was a real clever way of writing it. I give you a 5/5 for this beautiful write.

  • 9 years ago

    by morgan

    Great poem. i very much like how it flowed. and how u got your point across. great poem 5/5
    :):):):)

    Morgan :):):):)

  • 8 years ago

    by iRobbiee

    This is amazing :-) and I really like this it really made me laugh because sometimes I feel that way.. But I truely like this
    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Dave

    Very good, original