Comments : Crash Into Me (Lyrics)

  • 10 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I wonder uif i can streal that one ^_^

    it si way too perfect wonderfull job girl
    i loved this :

    "Life's not always rainbows
    Magic and butterflies
    But when you feel your voice is silent
    I'll always hear your cries"

    they were rocking .. i love it ^_^

    you have my vote no doubt

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Excellent song, I could seriously see this a famous piece! I loved the wording and the truth of it all, there was just so much meaning, it left me breathless. Well-expressed thoughts and emotions, a enjoyable read from start to finish. 5/5 from me, take care. Keep writing, always and forever.......

  • 10 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    When your sorrows start to haunt you
    And all you can feel is doubt
    Feel me out in the haze
    I can be your one way out.

    Try and get rid of the repetition of out in the last two lines .

    But other than that , honestly , that was awesome :) . I would love to hear Hedley or FaberDrive sing that , I really would . Fantastic rhyming and pretty much flawless flow . Keep writting lyrics .. You really deserve credit for them , and maybe one day you'll get it :) . 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow. Thats all I have to say. Theres a few parts that are iffy to me, but I think when you're writing a song that it's different than poetry. So, overall it's an amazing piece. But, the piece itself is great. It seems to flow well and I could feel the rhythm/beat. Which always makes out for a great song!