Comments : Each Day Hurts

  • 10 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    I really like this one. good work.

  • 10 years ago

    by The Queen

    Flows perfectly and ryhmed with ease dindt seem by force. I loved as well how you used some methapors in your poem. I would suggest if time comes for you to tell the truth, this piece would be a good start to say whats your true feelings. Good Job.