Those who are hurt
And feels like dirt
^^ I'd change these two lines a bit :
For those who were hurt,
And those who were treated like dirt ..
I don't know what it is , but you have really good messages .. Your writting is just too simple and much too forced . Use the rhymer , because it can help you find better matches for what you're trying to write . This one is okay though , 4/5
I liked this poem as it gives facts to those who were alone and allows many different emotions out at one time. However, I felt that in some parts the rhyming was forced.
"Cause it feels like no one is on your team"
I feel this line should be changed to having Feel instead of feels so it makes sense and also because you are still writting about the previous sentence where you mentioned "those".