Painting the Roses Red (Cameo)

by Ashleigh Skye   Mar 10, 2009


Red tint
masks the once white glow
to help make up for past mistakes
so you lie
and allow the smiles to grow
all the while knowing the truth
red paint.

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PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE THANKS A LOT

*Cameo-consists of 7 lines, syllables going 2-5-8-3-8-7-2*

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  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. I don't see anything that needs fixing. Nicely worded.

    gave it a 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    I like the way it's done, although, I think my brain is slow today as well...n stuff. Wanna' pm me on your idea?

  • 14 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Hmm... this is a strange one i read so far i realie didnt understand it. just cuz my brian is slow n stuff.
    but the ending of it i realie did like it.
    nicely done

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

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