The Storm

It felt like I was standing next to you, holding your hand and watching the storm together.

Great work, girlie..I truly enjoyed this one!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Very good lines actually... Liked it!
Good description and nice imagery. Nice to read.

"The magic of lightning
fills the evening sky,
illuminating beauty below."
`Such a simply worded few lines, yet youve portrayed a vivid image through your words.. well done. :]

"Teardrops from mourning angels
pour down from the coulds,
replenishing the dying Earth."
`I adored this! It was an alternate way of saying that its coming from above, heaven, like they are teardrops from angels.. gosh that's amazing Krista!.. I love the word replenishing too, really adds meaning!

"Clouds file into their place,
releasing their loud, bellowing
screams of thunderous cries."
`I'm completely and utterly blown away, I love the word choice.. it just is so powerful and amazing.. youre describing a storm amazingly and its perfectly written. I love the "bellowing screams" .. what a unique way of describing thunder.

"The rain will keep falling,
thunder will keep echoing,
lightning continue flashing."
`I love the repetition of "ing"

"Storms run throughout
the dark purple sky
in a single minute."
`Although thunderstorms can be threatening, youve painted a beautiful vivid image in my mind, the dark purple sky..soooo gorgeous! I can imagine the lightning flashing and producing purple and other colors in the sky.

"If only life on Earth
were this easy to
replenish and illuminate."
`I love it, a way to reitterate, and emphasize your idea.. repetition was used in a great way here..

Well done!

5/5.

Oh my, this is an amazing piece! So vivid, and descriptive, I love it! 5/5 from me, this is great :)

Keep writing,
Emily :)