Comments : Celebrating Spring (Haiku, Cinquain & Haiku)

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Excellent! Flowers dancing, smiling, greeting the sun, Spring. Such vivid images. Makes me feel good when I read this. Won't be long until Spring is here. Good Job. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by sneha

    Once again,excellent.You have knit your poem with all beautiful things and they stand together as a testimony for your poetic skills.

  • 9 years ago

    by Melissa

    How you scribe poetry in such a tight form is ambiguous to me. Your words are flawless and despite syllable counts the flow is always melodic. Very beautiful piece here, it deserves recognition! ;o)

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a truely beautiful form. You have painted a vision for the readrs eys that lets them see with yours.
    Excellent job!
    I've missed you :)
    Take Care Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Absolutely lovely and very breathtaking. You have portrayed such vivid imagery that it takes one's breath away. Not only did you fully entrance me but you never bored or confused the reader, each line was so captivating. A flawless write that was a pleasure to read! 5/5 from me, take care and keep writing, always and forever...

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Meena, this one is awesome.Beautiful imagery
    portrayed. Can feel the onset of spring.
    Excellent work.Keep it up.God bless.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderful blend of different forms...
    they wonderfully capture the beautfy of nature...

    //Their soft
    petals open,
    in bright gowns they stand tall//

    ^^ these lines indeed have so much softness and warmth... lovely..

    //In the hall of Spring
    on a plush carpet of green
    they celebrate life //

    ^^ my favorite stanza... so beautifully penned...

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh my, a very beautiful poem. The haikus are really beautiful.