Comments : The Many Different Sides of Me

  • 9 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I liked it alot. It seems like it's in a different writing style than what you usually do. 5/5. But I have a suggestion. You don't have to use it because I understand if you don't want to (people try to change my work forcefully sometimes and I get so mad!) How how about switching the positions of these 2 stanzas: The deep, literature-loving kind
    The one nobody seems to mind
    The side used in this poem at this moment
    The side that writes so frivolously,
    Some papers are burnt

    The side of a sensitive counselor
    That comes up with a solution every hour
    I'm more to this side when I'm on-line
    Because not all net pals have a life so fine