Comments : Rescuing since 1992

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I feel you were within poetic license here

    Everything seem to reflect a true feeling

    The only thing I would change is
    "never you would flee."
    you would never flee
    but that may just be me

    Overall I feel you were excellent at delivering a sense of strong admiration

  • 9 years ago

    by ether

    I don't really know what else to say but this was an amazingly cute poem. Not in the way it's written or the rhyme, but the message is damn cute. I respect that you've written this about a parental figure, it's really sweet and they're lucky to have you as their child.
    This was incredibly easy to read, the rhyme was perfect, likewise the flow.
    A great poem all 'round, 5/5.