My fairytale dream

by Tangible heartache   May 10, 2009


I want my happy ending,
Where my dreams come true,
Everything is perfect,
And I am with you.

You and I walking hand in hand,
Living old together to the end,
You're the love of my life,
My husband and my best friend.

Where even if we have fights,
We still are in deep love,
Even when you're gone,
I still feel your presence above.

But happy endings never come true,
Because obviously life isn't what it seems,
I keep on living the illusions,
And I am not living my fairytale dreams.

Written by Makalah May. 10, 2009

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Nawww-really sweet-but really sad!!!!!
    one suggestion-instead of "we are still in deep love" maybe u could write-"we are still deep in love"

    just a suggestion-but 5/5 from me

    aish
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    It's nice to see you're writing again, ive missed your work.

    This poem has a click to it, the flow and ryme is very nicely written and it's definitley going on my favorites.

    keep up the good work,

    5/5

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