Comments : Goodbye

  • 8 years ago

    by Mercedes

    Your Poem iiS Beautiful
    iiT Hit Mii Deep
    Closely To Bring Tears To Mh Eyes
    ii Use To Feel The Same Way
    But Yu Was more Brave Nd Went Away
    iiNstead Of Leaving ii Pretended Nd Still Stayed
    Even When ii Wanted To Leave Mh Feet Wouldnt Move, His Love Had A Strong Embrace On Mii

  • 7 years ago

    by victoria

    This is sooo beautiful. Sooo emotional. I loved it. The ending was sooo bitter-sweet. keep it up.

    victoria

  • 5 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    What a sad... Yet pretty poem!

    I enjoyed it, well done :)