First Kiss (Original)

by howwilltheystopme   Jul 3, 2009


That night I still remember,
It's not possible to forget,never,
You offered to bring me home,
& I smiled thinking, I'm not alone.

Going home in your car,
With your every move bringing me closer,
Unfortunately, my destination was not far,
& that kissing moment was gone forever.

You suggested taking the elevator with me,
I wouldn't reject, I didn't want to :),
It seemed like a fairytale dream,
Being confined together with you.

Elevator goes up each storey,
You and I holding each other's hand,
We turn to look at each other slowly,
Going to kiss &
BAM, it's the end.

The light goes off,
Another kiss I never gave,
The bad timing turns us off,
Though my first kiss was still safe.

For a moment I held you're hand tight,
Scared of the dark,scared of the company,
But you assured me by hugging me just right,
'Its going to be alright',you whispered softly.

There couldn't have been a better timing,
I figured it was now or never,
& thus,
We kissed.

And thats the end of the story on how,

you took,

my first kiss.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I like it. I can see it all happening, therefor the wording was great. Nice length not to long or to short. Made me want to read more.

    gave it a 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Ares

    Very nice poem and I especially like how you managed to keep a story running while describing emotions. Felt a bit like a short story which for a poem is really difficult to do.

    Decent beat and nice rythym, good job.

    --ares

  • 13 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Awww that is cute....5/5...I got poems too

  • 14 years ago

    by D Jon Versatino

    I wish i can vote for this work as many times as i could. Tell ya what Angel, You are a very good writer, i really love this oe!

  • 14 years ago

    by D Jon Versatino

    I wish i can vote for this work as many times as i could. Tell ya what Angel, You are a very good writer, i really love this oe!