A wonderfully written piece! Touching, and so pure. I love poems that readers can relate too, and this is one of them. You express yourself well through your work. And the title was eye catching, i had to read it. Job well done 5/5
Absolutely loved this poem! the message was well said lol i feel the same way. the emotion was excellent and i loved the vocab. most people tend to over do it to try to sound smart and they screw up the poem but you did it perfect. the flow was amazing as well 5/5 keep it up.