This one brought tears to eyes. you're def.
making a big mistake not telling someone
who cares about you that you have these
sucidial thoughts. no one can fight the good fight alone. All of us need help sometimes
today its you tomomrow maybe him but
thats how it works. you have to lean on each other. your poems rock. They cry out
for help. each word sadder than the last
I personaly believe you only get one life
so don't waste another day cause you can't replace the life you waste.
Other than that it was put together very good. i like it. And i know how u feel about not wanting to tell your bf. Im kinda in the same boat right now. Well if you do let me know how it goes. Great Job 5/5
8 years ago
I've had a few spurts of depression so I can relate, kind of. Good piece. 5/5 x
Nice write with a good rhythm and rhyme. Keep up the good work.
8 years ago
Im on kind of the same boat as you.
Depression, the occasional slash, and the every now and day pot session.
I can completely relate.
I felt your pain on the page and it spoke to me.
Sometimes telling someone is the best thing to do but other times you just need to let out a big scream and let your pain flow.
Every moment in life is a chance to turn it all around. Go ahead and cut and smoke but don't rely on those things as crutches as you go along because they will only help you to fall and fall and fall. Until theres nothing left to break. Amazing poem. 5/5.
Im dealing with depression now so if you need to talk or anything, you know. We are all here to help but its better to ask for help from a person that knows your situation.
An emotional piece! Full of sadness and depression. I liked the 4th stanza. Somehow it make me feel so hopeless when I read it. Very nice. Got the rhyme got the emotions... 5/5? why not?
Honey you have to be honest and tell your bf. Guys are not the tapeworm that lived inside our body! They won't know what girls thinking if we don't tell them! Oh except for some...hmm...ya maybe some guy is opposite but anyway its better if you let it out. We've to share! Especially in a relationship. All the best to you!