Comments : For Sarah Jones (She'll Never Know)

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem held my attention and reads like a ballad ...very interesting

  • 8 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Somewhere among this poem were the words Long john, it was certainly long and you will probably find not many will read this because of it. Yet I got sucked in again as at first I thought drivel yet I kept at it and it enraptured me because it seemed to go on and on its thread I lost after 0200 or something like that yet determined I carried on and found its end I was baffled as I had enjoyed it and it was like a breathe of fresh air full on the new yet not to taxing. I red it again and sailed through it like an old friend pulling me along I actually enjoyed it freshness and newness like life it went on and on and kept my interest truly remarkable I gave it a 5/5 there are errors with spelling
    and punctuation Prostitute springs to mind somewhere but it did not take away the feeling that I had read something special two poems now of yours I have enjoyed Excellent Ray S