4 my gal

by cory   Sep 12, 2009

It's a blessing from the god's
To have you by my side
I would suffer untold anguish
If I learned our love had died

A second spent without you
Seems like many years
You make the world even
Make me see through blinding tear's

The time before I met you
In a shadow I remained
And now the darkness lifted
By the gift we have obtained

You make the ocean twinkle
And add beauty to the moon
Your spirit shines so brightly
It has broken my cocoon

As I look into your eyes
My heart begins to speed
I feel a weight has lifted
Like a chained soul has been freed

Even if you left me
Didn't say a word at all
I'll still cherish every moment
Every tear and every fall

Your hold on me is strong
Our love pure like fallen rain
If you stay beside me
It forever will remain


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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I liked how you expressed you true emotions and love to "your gal." Another flawless piece, 5/5. Em x

  • 8 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Awesome! Its really beautiful and expressive of your feelings, it says so much about who she is to you, what she means, your feelings, excellently written, great flow and pace, well structured and to me it was flawless. :)