Comments : Forever Together (Collab End Of Eternity, Billy Rob)

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Honesty and simplicity is the key word in this poem. Loved the way it moves on and take you to the fairy land.

    Writing a collab with two talented people is an opportunity i am sure many people on this site would be praying for. It surely was a great experience.
    It surely was a great pleasure, thank you

    all the best and take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Famous Armenian

    Real nice

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A collab with 2 people is difficult but three is almost impossible but this is seamless and as it should be, can't really tell who wrote which lines. A love poem of memories of meeting the first love, nice. Well done to all of you.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Cindy you & the others did a very good job
    weaving this love poem :) Well done & keep
    that pen busy!
    Take care :)

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Beautiful! I love it! The three of you have written such beautiful words about an everlasting moment... I love how a simple school dance can be transformed into something as beautiful as this. Great job!! You deserve to win this contest :)

  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    When great and tallented minds come together a masterpiece such as this is formed.
    You all did an awesome job with this beautiful piece.Avery much enjoyed read.Hoping to read many more beautiful colabs by the three of you.
    Great job.
    paul...