Comments : Burning

  • 8 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Be the real you, and dont care what others think, and you will be happy. lol. 5/5 for sure.

  • 8 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I don't always know that started over completely and forgetting about your past is best, without it good or bad we wouldn't be here. couple spelling mistakes or typos "I'm back to the really me" and not capitalizing your I. Just little things really. good work though

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Not only is this poem well written but it has a powerful theme that many of us could learn from to start fresh

    well done

  • 8 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought the idea of the poem and being who your are, just stripped down and raw is good, but i dont think the repition of the word burning worked that well, it seemed to repitious and didnt quite work. Also i thought the line about love me like hate me was sort of cliche. Overall it was still good. 4/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Another very good write, I like this poem because many people feel the same way everyday and you managed to capture it in a very short and to the point poem. It is very well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    I love it. This piece was short, simple, but very enjoyable and well written. I liked the way you started it, because I feel it sometimes, a lot of the times. Saying goodbye to this me, and starting over. But I'm too stubborn to actually change. lol

    Love me like me hate me

    I love this line. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by BrayBray

    Don't let anyone tell you who to be. Live your own life, and never give up. Moving on is a crucial part of life. Short poem, but full of emotion.

    5/5. Keep up the good work!