Comments : The Echo Of Your Whip

  • 8 years ago

    by Lynn Anderson

    Love Love Love it! Great use of words!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Well...it seems to me this lady is not treating you very well at all..I have no idea if this is a figurative speech or something more concrete..but it really struck me as intensely sad.

    Good wording, though..you are a gifted writer.

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

    ps: Sorry it took me so long to return the read, your poems are well worth it!

  • 8 years ago

    by Corinne

    I can't quite tell if you loathe or love the "whip" - Perhaps a little of both? Either way, a compelling piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Oh, the interpretations that this poem creates in my mind! A wonderful read ... before bed. lol Maybe I better check out something light first. So many lines grabbed me but I do love "the dawn is my witness". :)