Comments : Chances

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Now that sounds like a pretty good suggestion to me!

    Indeed why bother about tomorrow...just live each day at a time and see where life brings you. Amen to that;)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A wonderful write Sylvia! ... Full of joy and passion :) I just loved it,

    You rock! :))

  • 7 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Ok Sylvia I'm ready to dance, but you'll have to teach me :-) loved the poem it was uplifting and just fun to read.

  • 7 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    One of your best, Sylvia. This write, if it insinuates anything, insinuates that one must have faith and take the first step. As MLK said, " You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step."

    Brief, yet holds very wonderful messages. a 5 for me.

  • 7 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Short but really well done Sylvia. Life is all about taking those chances, and one in specific, love.

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Sometimes we have to learn to take chances
    & see how life will turn out, especially when
    we have the loved ones by our side..liked
    the read :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    The wording was a little flat to me.

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Beautiful! Simple and short, yet so sweet! I love it... I think everyone wishes to do what you've written about with the one they love... It's wonderful!

  • 7 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well done Sylvia what seems a simple poem holds a lot more meaning than at first glance.
    Wisdom surely comes at the wrong time in ones life. HAHA
    Well done

    Grant

  • 7 years ago

    by anand singh

    In only a few words you've penned a beautiful verse my friend.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 7 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This wasn't my favorite from you, but it was still a nice piece. I do like the happy feeling that comes with it. It's hopeful and relaxing and more people should read this. It seems so carefree and I like that as well. Good job hun :) Nik