Comments : No Longer Will My Heart Cry

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    No matter how we plan our lives, that plan never seems to work out. It is sad when the light of love goes out, be it a lover, family or friends. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I started reading your poem and wasn't expecting to see the hope I did at the end, but that was very delightful and nice to see. Life definatly is never planned, and we have to take each day as it comes. Your title spoke the entire message you were trying to get across, and your poem reflected that. Well done Cindy.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A sad write but it shows that your heart has
    taken the right decision....hope you are okay.
    take care..hugs

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Hi I really liked this as can relate to it right now. you wrote it well and the line that I liked was, still my love for you was there. funny how we can still love someone no matter how much they hurt us. anyway great poem xxxx

  • 8 years ago

    by Corinne

    Excellent poem Cindy - You just get better and better! :-)

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Another great piece dear. Could see inbetween words the pain and emotions which has been released. Facts of life has been potrayed in the best possible manner.
    Great write friend.

    all the best and take care

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww... you've expressed such deeep emotions... feelings that i can relate to and have been feeling lately... I actually just wrote a poem trying to express my feelings, if ur interested its called "Senseless"
    I really think you did a great job with this poem... You really show ur hurt feelings.. Great job

  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    Another sad yet beautifuly penned pice.The way you express your innermost feelings always brings a tear to the eyes.
    Take care my friend.

  • 8 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Cindy. This is a masterpiece. Each and every worried carries a temple of wisdom, and especially, the last stanza:

    Life is never what we plan
    Maybe soon you won't be blind
    Remenber your lessons taught
    Look within and peace you'll find.

    By far, this is the best poem i've ever read by your Cindy. THE BEST. An unhesitant 5 for me. Walah.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A wonderful rhyming poem here, Cindy that is raw with emotion.
    I love how the sadness of this piece subtly gives way to hope in the penultimate stanza
    "You can't hurt me anymore" and then collapses completely in the last as hope wins out: "Look within and peace you'll find".
    Even our darkest clouds are lined with silver.

    Great write, great flow and wonderful sentiment. All the very best Cindy,