I started reading your poem and wasn't expecting to see the hope I did at the end, but that was very delightful and nice to see. Life definatly is never planned, and we have to take each day as it comes. Your title spoke the entire message you were trying to get across, and your poem reflected that. Well done Cindy.
Hi I really liked this as can relate to it right now. you wrote it well and the line that I liked was, still my love for you was there. funny how we can still love someone no matter how much they hurt us. anyway great poem xxxx
Awww... you've expressed such deeep emotions... feelings that i can relate to and have been feeling lately... I actually just wrote a poem trying to express my feelings, if ur interested its called "Senseless"
I really think you did a great job with this poem... You really show ur hurt feelings.. Great job
Cindy. This is a masterpiece. Each and every worried carries a temple of wisdom, and especially, the last stanza:
Life is never what we plan
Maybe soon you won't be blind
Remenber your lessons taught
Look within and peace you'll find.
By far, this is the best poem i've ever read by your Cindy. THE BEST. An unhesitant 5 for me. Walah.
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
A wonderful rhyming poem here, Cindy that is raw with emotion.
I love how the sadness of this piece subtly gives way to hope in the penultimate stanza
"You can't hurt me anymore" and then collapses completely in the last as hope wins out: "Look within and peace you'll find".
Even our darkest clouds are lined with silver.
Great write, great flow and wonderful sentiment. All the very best Cindy,