Beautifully penned Myryn :)
totally deserves the win!
Write on~

Lovely as always dear. You always amaze me with your creative poetry. This was very emotional and well peened as Nema said. I wouldn't change a thing, it's flawless just like this. Great work :) Nik

Congrats on the club win Myryn ... very deserving hun!

Wonderfully penned, loved it !

This has a very skillfully written free flow and astronomical metaphors that has made me speechless This is a masterpiece

I'm speechless. It has been awhile since I have been on this site and to come back to read a piece like this- simply inspiring.
It gives me hope that perhaps this club still has hope to survive.
Your wonderfully talented and your piece captured me thoroughly.
Well done,
Elly.

Very well done, left me speechless as well. I was so deeply engaged into your poem as I read, it was absolutely outstanding. Congrats on your win, very deserving.

Wow, this poem is definitely thought-provoking. I do love a good challenge though I must admit I had to reread a few times to come to an understanding, and yet am not sure if my interpretation if right lol. But I love such poems! It's as if you are saying that you could hear that special someone's voice in night, and it seems to evoke this sense of bitter yearning. Like he/she is no longer there for you and all you can hold on to is the song sung to you as a piece of memory. I loved this (: 5/5!

"Excellent" doesn't amount to how good this poem is. This is so beautiful, I swear. Favorite!
I love how you repeated "I still hear you sing to me". My heart skipped a beat... or two.

You
are
marvelous!

<3 5/5

Well I agree with Divinity. My heart definitely skipped a beat or two! Beautifully done! Well thought out and couldn't be any better! Masterpiece! Congrats on your win. Hope to hear from you more.