Comments : Another Christmas

  • 7 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow cale, do you know how much your writing has changed from your first poem to now??? this is an amazing write and i am so proud of you!!!! 5/5

    -laura

  • 7 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Oh my goodness, this poem stunned me. The ending was unexpected lol. Its a beautiful poem , so full of love. Very well written.

    All the best,
    Olwin.

  • 7 years ago

    by Kuro

    Well, this was a good poem in the sense that it had nice rhyming and told a nice love story.

    BUT THE END WAS SOO VERY SAD!
    ;_;

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww! This poem is sooo beautiful! I loved it to be honest but was so shocked at the ending, I was expecting a happy ending. I love how you wrote about your love throughout all the seasons and holidays.. That was very sweet and romantic. Great job with this poem!

  • 7 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Ok...this was beautifully written but so incredibly sad, it made me cry seeing it play out. You do a wonderful job at putting emotions into words and drawing the reader into the world of the poem. This is amazing like the others I've read, wonderful job. You might want to change the word "feels" to "fills" on the 26th line though. Wonderful job though