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by stormingdance (Jessica)
Your choice of words is astounding. This if by far one of my favorite poems. I enjoyed every stanza, every line, but these are the ones that stood out the greatest for me:
Like murky depths of lies,
The rocky bottom of truth,"
To me, these lines reflect reality. The truth isn't always what it seems - but these lines run deep, that even saying that puts me on shaky grounds.
Other lines that stood out:
Cease the moment,
Not the day,"
"Acid rain cant melt my hate away"
You've written a beautiful, dark piece. I'm glad you shared this with us. :)
by CY GINDLE
Like i said befor i don,t get the dark poems
but i just want to read everything your write
you just have a hell of a way of putting things togther