Comments : Goddess, Burn me.

  • 8 years ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Your choice of words is astounding. This if by far one of my favorite poems. I enjoyed every stanza, every line, but these are the ones that stood out the greatest for me:

    "Dark, dripping,
    Like murky depths of lies,
    The rocky bottom of truth,"

    To me, these lines reflect reality. The truth isn't always what it seems - but these lines run deep, that even saying that puts me on shaky grounds.

    Other lines that stood out:

    Cease the moment,
    Not the day,"

    "Acid rain cant melt my hate away"

    You've written a beautiful, dark piece. I'm glad you shared this with us. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Like i said befor i don,t get the dark poems
    but i just want to read everything your write
    you just have a hell of a way of putting things togther