Comments : DRIP! DRIp! DRip! Drip!

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a different and interesting piece. Can feel the longing to escape in your words. Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Something entirely different from you, but you did an excellent job. Loved the alliteration scattered throughout & your word choice really reflected the dark mood. Nicely done, I thought you did well.

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is the straight third scary poem i hv read today...what a way to start my morning.

    Very scary poem, very nicely expressed and the selection of words...simply outstanding.

    all the best and take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    At first I had to laugh a little, because you are such a kind lady, ha could you possible write something scary? But as I read it, I felt something very deep in it, as if you were saying something dark and evil has got you under it's spell.
    But the poem is not really frightening, it is a little like the Alfred Hitchock movies made me feel..uneasy.

    Good job on this, I would like to see you write a horror poem for children one day:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is something different by you & its done
    very well too! I enjoyed this read :D

  • 8 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is a very powerful write from you Sylvia... Penned with a lot of emotion I thought Lol. An excellent piece. Sylvia.... you're the best.

    Lots of love,

  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    Another well penned piece from you.Good job.