This was absolutely fantasic Lu!!! It reminded me of my fiancee and I because I grew up without money and her family is really really wealthy. I was afraid to meet them because I thought they would look down on me but they were very accepting and it paid off for all of us because we have an amazing friendship/family now. You have to love the little things and life and see people for who they truly are inside, if not your missing out. Great message in the poem and just an amazing job 5/5 for sure

Omg Luanne! This time round, you've exceeded your limits again! First off, I have to say that I have NEVER come across a poem like this and I'm glad I took the time out to read it!!! I LOVED the way you wrote this piece, awesomely beautiful~
Next, I loved how you wove such a wondrous story like this from simple things in life which we might not have discovered or took the time to place ourselves in their shoes, or rather, see it from another point of view! One word: Speechless.

Keep writing Lu!!! <3

Each held the answer
to survive another day
ignorance overcame reality
and for that, they both would pay
^
Love,love love it.
Can someone explain
why on earth do i come acrosss this now ?
I agree with Luna..
Children don't hate!

I'm sorry I'm late
But this is just wonderful
You had me from the Title :)