Love it! and is that where u got ur user name from?

It was lovely.
I like the beggining

"Where is the peril?
When is the pain?
Why is the sorrow?
What is the gain?
Being bitter?
Salty rain?"

It really has a nice flow through the whole poem. It is nice and it makes you think.

I enjoyed this one by you. its different but a good different. loved how in the end it was a friend.
great job.

victoria