Comments : Broken-hearted Girl

  • 7 years ago

    by Jad

    A moving short poem that I do believe many young girls can relate to at having separated families. I live with neither my father nor mother so i know how this feels and you have portrayed deep loneliness in these lines. I was taken in by the first line until the last and you did a great job describing everything else in the poem. Great job and keep writing.

  • 7 years ago

    by dontlookpassmytears

    Thank you so very much.