Comments : A Fantasy of Paradise

  • 8 years ago

    by ADyingProphet

    I like this piece a lot...descriptive. Kinda makes me wish I was back in Hawaii but unlike the poem mine wasn't a dream haha. Good work! keep it up

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes our dreams takes us to special and peaceful places..I liked the place which your poem took me to..a nice read :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Malboros pipe

    Your imagery is so vivid, yet you use such simple language. My favourite thing to write about is nature and you just encapsulated me completely with the most blissful idea... i.e. paradise. Great work. and hope to see more in the future. 5/5