Wow i love the analogies in this one a lot ... great job ... going to favs ^_^

Wow! This shows so much emotion, all your words make PERFECT sense; I hope one day, I can feel this way.
Great Job 5/5

Wow... this poem was breathtakingly beautiful and inspiring! To be honest I was in such a bad mood but I read this and felt so good inside. I love it! Definitely a favorite and deserves a 5/5 :)

Wow! this had really good rhyme and flow. it made it easy to read. and the ending was great! :D

you friend is lucky to have a friend like you

~Kuro

Very nice.

My other comment is lame, gosh. xD

Anyhow, this is a good example of how a true friend or a mate can really bring you up and make you better than you thought you could be. And while both are pretty hard to obtain, they are priceless and invaluable to have while fighting this world's influence. Empowering piece of writing there.

Wooooow i love that it's beautiful
bravo