Comments : Train

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A gruesome way to die, beneath the steel wheels of a train. You told a story and it was engrossing from the beginning to the end. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    A haunting poem that symbolizes to me, inevitable mortality. I love how you weave the imagery of the night train along with her growing desire to see it, plus the poignant ending.


  • 8 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This train means so much in this poem. It's more than just a simple train, it's life itself. Sometimes we can hear life calling us, when we're about to make a choice, or in some other critical decisions. When we hear that voice, we are in some way guided. This train, that the woman thought she heard, was the calling of life to end. The structure was briliant and the rhyming was good. Just loved it 5/5